DiS in Space

Chapter 4, page 8

July 15th, 2017, 2:00 pm
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kidcthulhu July 16th, 2017, 9:07 am
Very interesting. I like the bite-sized flashbacks. You get a little taste and it leaves you wanting more, but it doesn't slow down the story.
Dadaph July 16th, 2017, 9:29 am
@kidcthulhu: Thanks. There is an entire flashback chapter coming up, hope it won't slow it down too much, but it is a part that's very important to the story. So much I even considering starting out with it.
As for the small ones, I like putting in a panel or two here and there. This is kind of a major one for Panik, and it's important to see for what's coming up next...
Dadaph July 16th, 2017, 9:30 am
@Dadaph: Chapter 6 is the flashback one, it's coming for September, and it's one I'm personally very happy with, just wanted to say that :)
kidcthulhu July 16th, 2017, 12:29 pm
@Dadaph: You're a good story teller; I'm sure it'll be great.

I've read other comics where they don't ease you into it and then drop tiresome flashbacks that grind everything to a halt.
Dadaph July 16th, 2017, 12:35 pm
@kidcthulhu: Thank you... and yeah, seen it often where there are flashbacks and flashbacks within flashbacks. I get confused by a lot of time jumping.
I have done a lot of worldbuilding, so I want to show some of it, but I try to focus the characters to tell a story within the world I have created.