DiS in Space

Chapter 14, page 5

May 9th, 2018, 2:00 pm
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Dadaph April 22nd, 2018, 9:05 am
Does Aqualus really know what he's doing?
This is the last part of the story I actually wrote out in detail. There was always something off. At one point, I had Traktus come with Aqualus to Atlantis, and instead having 45-K guard Embla and Panik, but that didn't work simply because Aqualus created him with the raid on Atlantis in mind. Also, Panik will shortly start bargaining, and while Traktus doesn't look the part, he's more open for suggestions than 45-K would be.

In the end, I'm happy with how it turned out. There was one major plothole left, but I think I managed to use it to my advantage, to actually create one last trap.
More on that shortly...
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kidcthulhu May 9th, 2018, 5:08 pm
I'm loving this chapter so far. I hope that last plot hole involves a certain invisible Paladin.
Dadaph May 10th, 2018, 3:18 am
@kidcthulhu: There may be a certain invisible Paladin soon. I'll even bring her back as a major character around chapter 20, so stay tuned :)
Linn July 2nd, 2018, 5:38 pm
OK I'm going to do a yaoi side comic with Ask and Aqualus