DiS in Space

Chapter 14, page 7

May 13th, 2018, 2:00 pm
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Dadaph April 22nd, 2018, 9:19 am
As for the plothole I mentioned. Here it is. Embla made a comment on it earlier in chapter 8 page 8. Where are the soldiers?
At that point in time, Embla thought her powers wouldn't even work because of the Edge. The Emperor may share that belief, or lie. Either way, it still really didn't make any sense why he would send powerless paladins to get Aqualus. Even less sense for him to send all four of them...
UNLESS he sent them all to empty Atlantis, to lure Aqualus back. Which makes it into an obvious trap.

When I write my stories, I go back a lot to look for stuff that doesn't make sense, and when I see something, a plothole. I may not even go ahead to fix it, but rather write the story around it, to have the plothole make sense.
If I have a character question a plothole, my idea is by bringing that plothole to focus, I can use it later for something like this, and the story kinda fixes itself.

Depends on the plothole, though, but this one was the one missing link I needed to tie my story together.
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Linn July 2nd, 2018, 5:35 pm
PANIK WHAT R U HIDING
And i feel so uncomfortable by watching assless Traktus... So many questions but im not sure if i want to ask...